Rahul wrote:

Vishal16 wrote:

I remember so well
The day that you came into my life
You asked for my name
You had the most beautiful smile

My life started to change
I'd wake up each day feeling alright
With you right by my side
Makes me feel things will work out just fine

How did you know
I needed someone like you in my life
That there's an empty space in my heart
You came at the right time in my life

I'll never forget
How you brought the sun to shine in my life
And took all the worries and fears that I had
I guess what I'm really trying to say
It's not everyday that someone like you comes my way
No words can express how much I love you

Vishal16 wrote:

I remember so well
The day that you came into my life
You asked for my name
You had the most beautiful smile

My life started to change
I'd wake up each day feeling alright
With you right by my side
Makes me feel things will work out just fine

How did you know
I needed someone like you in my life
That there's an empty space in my heart
You came at the right time in my life

I'll never forget
How you brought the sun to shine in my life
And took all the worries and fears that I had
I guess what I'm really trying to say
It's not everyday that someone like you comes my way
No words can express how much I love you

Fucking hell you have only one life......your wasting it by the loads of 'in my life'


Excellent thoughts but that poem is too gay, the use of words I mean.(sorry if you don't like the criticism)


By the way is this poem written in appreciation of your favourite pornstar?

If not who is she?

How is the poem gay?

Vishal16 wrote:

How is the poem gay?

Quoting myself here:

Rahul wrote:

Excellent thoughts but that poem is too gay, the use of words I mean.(sorry if you don't like the criticism)


By the way is this poem written in appreciation of your favourite pornstar?

If not who is she?

You can't read it properly can you?


Anyways...answer my last two questions

How is the use of words making the poem gay ignit ?
I can read Im asking HOW?

Vishal16 wrote:

How is the use of words making the poem gay ignit ?
I can read Im asking HOW?

I meant the words used makes it sound gay.

Which words?

Vishal16 wrote:

Which words?

The whole collection of thoughts are described in a gay manner

You cant appreciate something good can you

Vishal16 wrote:

You cant appreciate something good can you

Well I can if it is good

Only you felt the poem was gay

Vishal16 wrote:

Only you felt the poem was gay

Well it is only me who has been arsed to at least read and give my views on it. I don't find anyone else replying to this.

Balls to everyone else here.
Others as in other friends...outside the gang

Vishal16 wrote:

Balls to everyone else here.
Others as in other friends...outside the gang

Now how am I supposed to know you share your poems with your other friends outside the gang?

Obvious isnt it

Vishal16 wrote:

Obvious isnt it

It isn't. I don't share my poetry with other friends outside the gang. Obvious to you might not be obvious to others.

So back to the topic...only you felt the poem was gay

Scouse


A tale of a land far away
Where delusion and retarded Scouse play
Hoping and praying they'll shine again
Each year ends in misery...oh that's a shame

Each year is their year apparently
Each time it goes tits up oh so badly!
They shout...the FA is corrupt...hypocrisy!
And in unison on a manc win they yell CONSPIRACY!

The world is against these warriors of truth
Every spastic there hopes that now their delusion will bore fruit
An army of average knights they've assembled
Yet they proclaim it's world class without a slight tremble

They'll win the holy grail one day
In the waiter we trust they always say
Speaking about the waiter...he's fat and Spanish
With his facts he loses game after game and then it's OH FISH!!

Fuck you bin dippers please get a job
You'll always have to walk alone with this Spanish gob
The diving thug and lady boy your only hope
"Next year will be our year" Oh Christ! sob sob sob!



Dated: 10:03am 27th October, 2009

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The History Of The Devil Gang


So here I go, let me start
I was really bored, thought I'd act smart
I'm writing this rhyme about the devil gang
Hope it turns out sweet and tastes like tang

A useless git called Vishal, came up with this all
Decided to make a comm but kept it very small
A small group was called and invited to join
We all gathered but I all I thought was "What's the point?"

The gang looked great, we liked it all
But we were wrong, it turned out to be small
Activity soon dropped, shite happened
We invited more members but the place just flattened.

Somehow we kept it going, and the place was fine
Then came out the fight, the silly bloody fight
I felt like laughing at you mongs, it was done for spite
The place was never the same again and it all felt like a mosquito bite

The Ronaldo saga ruined the gang, it was drowned
I laughed hysterically, while the others frowned
Friendships were broken, people were removed from the list
All I thought at that time was "There must be a twist!"

There wasn't a twist sadly
We needed a change badly
So we decided to move the gang to a forum gladly
But it all went tits up I yelled out madly

The place looks gloomy now
It started out as a place so nice
Now with very few visits each day
It certainly lacked some spice

The place is dead now
It looks like this is the end
So I'll end this boring poem
For this is the short history of the devil gang

Dated: 27th November, 2009 at 15:23

Here is the thread

Rebellious

I'm acting a bit weird, don't know why?
I'm feeling really happy, love making people cry
There is something in me which is making me go mad
The things which I once opposed to, now I consider rad

Maybe it's the booze
The path I decided to choose
All I know is I'm pretty delirious
I think I might never get serious

This might just be a short phase
The world to me looks like a hazy maze
What's happened in the past few weeks?
Something I'm unaware of.....but has led to massive tweaks

I've lost all sense of consideration
In my nonsensical derision
I've stopped caring for people I know
For some reason.....this doesn't bring me sorrow

This life which was so tedious seems so fun
I don't know why.....but it's a significant turn
Life.......bloody hell is a mystery
I think the sane part of my life is now a history

Let's hope this is just a short change with which I don't die
I'm hopeful I'll be back to my sane sense...I'll survive
My decisions have always been contentious
I've started loving life and rhymes and I've turned rebellious


Dated: 27th February, 2010 at 7:46pm IST

Here is the thread

Love.....Crap!


Love is a thing unknown to me
An expensive virtue, a luxury I cannot see
It's magic once felt though at times it hurts
The heart goes crazy....it bleeds and blurts
The pain and suffering felt is really bad
It drives people crazy and ultimately they go mad
Thus love is a strange feeling to possess
To some it's a joy, to most its distress
I'm happy I haven't felt it before
For it seems it can be very sore
I think I won't feel it in future too
For me, my dear, my love is you
You are the one I craved for ages
The joy and happiness I've only read on pages
Now I realise how precious you are
You'll be with me throughout as you've been so far
You are, yes you are......LIFE!


Here is the thread

Bai Wankesh Gayer

There lived a guy
Very Shy
Never spoke
Used to cry

Bumped across a guy
In the hollow cyber space
Now he wasn't shy
Cause the guy he met was ace

The wanker was now a bender
He used to love to act gay
And his dick so slender
That's what people say

He used to call himself Sai
Had huge hopes, thought he'd be rich
But could only become a bai
Oh how his life did switch!

One day he bumped across another man
He wasn't even gay
And a massive Man United fan

The guy transformed the bai
Turned him into a regular guy
Discussed footy and : )) galore
Now he wasn't the same again, but a massive whore

Now he talks shite, but is a man
His gay days are over, he now is insane
He is again into wanking
Thinks that this is supreme

The journey ends we think
But oh wait...we are just starting
The name has changed
But Bai Wankesh Gayer will always remain.


Dated: 4th March, 2010 at 11:32 PM


Here's the thread

The Miserable Guy

There lived a man
In an obscure far away land
Was a good guy
But always sad and a little shy

Had everything he ever wanted
Always greedy, wanted more
But god wasn't pleased
He decided to show him the door

He sent an angel, albeit an evil one
To manipulate his mind and twist his fate
Now the guy grew even more miserable
His life was now only..well...horrible

The guy really needs help the evil angel thought
He tried a few things and help he sought
But the guy wouldn't listen
He had made a parallel miserable universe
Where he was the pope and other sad blokes his church

The evil angel got fed up
Decided it's not worth much
Now he decided to have some fun
He kept winding him up till he would run

So the angel changed into a sexy girl
Went to the guys house with exotic twirls
He enticed the guy, seduced him no end
The guy was excstatic, he thought this was a gift that god sent

He thought his duck would be broken
End of the misery he thought
But his world was shaken
When a dick in his hand he caught

Dated: 5th March, 2010 at 5:21pm IST

Here's the thread

My present life

I once had a pathetic life,
I always dreamt of having a beautiful wife.
My life used to suck,
But it all changed when I decided to not give a fuck.

I then started smoking and boozing too.
I found everything funny, even the cow's moo.
Smoking and boozing, oh they were cool.
I found a hot chic, who made me drool.
I liked her a lot.
As much as my hookah pot.
I then found out, she had a moustache.
I was pissed so I added water to my ciggi's ash.

And then I quit.
Only for some hours.
I knew quitting was wrong, it made me feel like a git.
Now that I started it all again, I went to see some cars.

Never was I angry again, never was I pissed.
I was always grinning like a twat, in front of my dad, who was gonna give me a gift.

Pretty smooth.

That moustache part

Thank you

good one