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Vishal16
Doesn't like his tagline messed around with
Posts : 5295
Join date : 2009-04-21
Age : 33
Location : Mumbai
 |  Subject: If Someone would love me  Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:51 pm | |
| If someone would love me so much
that I could forget the world.
If someone would love me so much
that romeo would envy me.
I would hold her close
Tell her how it feels.
If someone would love me so much
that the summers could chill my soul.
and that love would be re-discovered.
I would kiss her on the cheek
and lift her to the peak.
If someone would love me so much
that I could be the Greek God
and have the most beautiful time.
I would be lost in her fur,
would walk endless streets with her.
But only if at all it were true,
Cause that someone is none.
As I still remember the world,
Romeo is still in luck.
The summers are still hard to bear,
and that love is pretty much rare.
I am still in the darkness
& my times are still odd.
Cause that someone is none,
And I still walk the streets alone. |
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Navpreet
The Forum Techie
Posts : 2269
Join date : 2009-07-08
Age : 31
Location : Enter at your peril, Past the vaulted door Impossible things will happen That the World's never seen before. In Dexter's Laboratory Lives the smartest boy you've ever seen But Dee Dee blows his experiments To Smithereens! There's Gloom and Doom When Things go Boom In Dexter's Lab
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:02 pm | |
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Meh
Sniggy
Posts : 42
Join date : 2010-02-21
Age : 32
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:52 pm | |
| Touching.  |
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Navpreet
The Forum Techie
Posts : 2269
Join date : 2009-07-08
Age : 31
Location : Enter at your peril, Past the vaulted door Impossible things will happen That the World's never seen before. In Dexter's Laboratory Lives the smartest boy you've ever seen But Dee Dee blows his experiments To Smithereens! There's Gloom and Doom When Things go Boom In Dexter's Lab
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:47 pm | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:32 pm | |
| Damn good. Make one for me too.  Write Sai Higher on it with number 99 |
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Navpreet
The Forum Techie
Posts : 2269
Join date : 2009-07-08
Age : 31
Location : Enter at your peril, Past the vaulted door Impossible things will happen That the World's never seen before. In Dexter's Laboratory Lives the smartest boy you've ever seen But Dee Dee blows his experiments To Smithereens! There's Gloom and Doom When Things go Boom In Dexter's Lab
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:49 pm | |
| Tomorrow. Auf weidershein. |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
Posts : 6147
Join date : 2009-04-21
Age : 32
Location : shekshy shekshy
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:57 pm | |
| Very good lover boy. Although you've blatantly stolen the idea from if "I think I really need someone rhyme" - Vishal16 wrote:
If someone would love me so much
that I could be the Greek God
and have the most beautiful time.
I would be lost in her fur,
would walk endless streets with her. I always suspected Vishal had a thing for hairy bitches. |
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Pujit
Posts : 358
Join date : 2010-04-22
Age : 31
Location : My fart will go on....
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:53 pm | |
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Navpreet
The Forum Techie
Posts : 2269
Join date : 2009-07-08
Age : 31
Location : Enter at your peril, Past the vaulted door Impossible things will happen That the World's never seen before. In Dexter's Laboratory Lives the smartest boy you've ever seen But Dee Dee blows his experiments To Smithereens! There's Gloom and Doom When Things go Boom In Dexter's Lab
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:11 pm | |
| Bitches are mostly hairy. Except the Daschund(sic). |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
Posts : 6147
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Age : 32
Location : shekshy shekshy
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:15 pm | |
| - Navpreet wrote:
- Bitches are mostly hairy. Except the Daschund(sic).
I didn't understand the last bit so I'll just assume that this post was never made.  |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:03 am | |
| Good poem |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:19 am | |
| Girls are falling all over because of this poem.
We should run a campaign for this poem.
"If Someone would love me" for The National Poem of India!
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:21 am | |
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Vishal16
Doesn't like his tagline messed around with
Posts : 5295
Join date : 2009-04-21
Age : 33
Location : Mumbai
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:10 am | |
| - Rahul wrote:
- I always suspected Vishal had a thing for hairy bitches.
By fur I mean zulfein if you know what i mean |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:13 am | |
| fur is not that Those things are called....ummm...hair |
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Vishal16
Doesn't like his tagline messed around with
Posts : 5295
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Age : 33
Location : Mumbai
| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:14 am | |
| that wouldnt rhyme
fur here represents hair |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:14 am | |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:28 am | |
| Half of the things in the poem don't rhyme in anycase. One more word wouldn't have made a difference. |
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Vishal16
Doesn't like his tagline messed around with
Posts : 5295
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:47 am | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:40 pm | |
| My pleasure |
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Rahul
Stupid and Annoying
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| | Subject: Re: If Someone would love me Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:19 pm | |
| Someone please find him this someone  |
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