I'm acting a bit weird, don't know why?
I'm feeling really happy, love making people cry
There is something in me which is making me go mad
The things which I once opposed to, now I consider rad

Maybe it's the booze
The path I decided to choose
All I know is I'm pretty delirious
I think I might never get serious

This might just be a short phase
The world to me looks like a hazy maze
What's happened in the past few weeks?
Something I'm unaware of.....but has led to massive tweaks

I've lost all sense of consideration
In my nonsensical derision
I've stopped caring for people I know
For some reason.....this doesn't bring me sorrow

This life which was so tedious seems so fun
I don't know why.....but it's a significant turn
Life.......bloody hell is a mystery
I think the sane part of my life is now a history

Let's hope this is just a short change with which I don't die
I'm hopeful I'll be back to my sane sense...I'll survive
My decisions have always been contentious
I've started loving life and rhymes and I've turned rebellious


Dated: 27th February, 2010 at 7:46pm IST


A rhyme on the current state of my mind.

Do rate.

Very nice....special mention to the 5th verse

Vishal16 wrote:

Very nice....special mention to the 5th verse

Thanks for the appreciation. You're one critic I love to have on the forum. (Not in a gay way)

Rahul wrote:

Vishal16 wrote:

Very nice....special mention to the 5th verse

Thanks for the appreciation. You're one critic I love to have on the forum. (Not in a gay way)

That makes me feel so good in my hollow tin chest :|

I was serious.

I know that

Hollow tin chest? What was all that about?

Apparently thats what you all think, dont you?

huh? I think you have a hollow chest? What?

Very good

Never mind

oh I finally understood hollow chest bit (not really)

ok