The History Of The Devil Gang


So here I go, let me start
I was really bored, thought I'd act smart
I'm writing this rhyme about the devil gang
Hope it turns out sweet and tastes like tang

A useless git called Vishal, came up with this all
Decided to make a comm but kept it very small
A small group was called and invited to join
We all gathered but I all I thought was "What's the point?"

The gang looked great, we liked it all
But we were wrong, it turned out to be small
Activity soon dropped, shite happened
We invited more members but the place just flattened.

Somehow we kept it going, and the place was fine
Then came out the fight, the silly bloody fight
I felt like laughing at you mongs, it was done for spite
The place was never the same again and it all felt like a mosquito bite

The Ronaldo saga ruined the gang, it was drowned
I laughed hysterically, while the others frowned
Friendships were broken, people were removed from the list
All I thought at that time was "There must be a twist!"

There wasn't a twist sadly
We needed a change badly
So we decided to move the gang to a forum gladly
But it all went tits up I yelled out madly

The place looks gloomy now
It started out as a place so nice
Now with very few visits each day
It certainly lacked some spice

The place is dead now
It looks like this is the end
So I'll end this boring poem
For this is the short history of the devil gang

Dated: 27th November, 2009 at 15:23

So how was the poem? Please express your views below.

I'm not having a poll from now onwards just post what you felt about it.

i'm new and i dont know the history, but the poem feels nice

Rahul wrote:

The History Of The Devil Gang


Somehow we kept it going, and the place was fine
Then came out the fight, the silly bloody fight
I felt like laughing at you mongs, it was done for spite
The place was never the same again and it all felt like a mosquito bite

The Ronaldo saga ruined the gang, it was drowned
I laughed hysterically, while the others frowned
Friendships were broken, people were removed from the list
All I thought at that time was "There must be a twist!"


Dated: 27th November, 2009 at 15:23

Those were the days, weren't they? I think Ashirwad's pics were targeted the most with comments..

Cool poem.. could use more "devil gang-ish" words i guess...

First there was a fight between pro and anti Ronaldo gang along with petty quarrels in the photo comments. Then Vishal and Sai 'broke up' because of MJ's death :p and something happened between Vishal and Moid.

By devil-gangish words you mean numpty, dickhead, mofos, spastics, cunts etc, don't you?

Rahul wrote:

By devil-gangish words you mean numpty, dickhead, mofos, spastics, cunts etc, don't you?

Yeah!

Navpreet wrote:

Rahul wrote:

By devil-gangish words you mean numpty, dickhead, mofos, spastics, cunts etc, don't you?

Yeah!

Will take care next time

Broke up my ass we werent a couple would would ''break up'' and not my problem if that sadistic bitch had ego problems !

Well you were a couple of friends so technically a couple. Not a thermocouple mind you but a couple nonetheless.

Agreed to that but still how does that connect to break up?
We never had anything of that sort in the 1st place which would ''break up'' later on

Vishal16 wrote:

Agreed to that but still how does that connect to break up?
We never had anything of that sort in the 1st place which would ''break up'' later on

You can't take a bit of humour, can you?

Thats not humor :|

Vishal16 wrote:

Thats not humor :|

Who are you to decide?

Im Vishal

Vishal16 wrote:

Im Vishal

Being huge doesn't give you the authority to decide what is humorous and what isn't.

But it goes that way

Vishal16 wrote:

But it goes that way

Might as well share your opinions on the forum and not act like a spastic. The thread is meant for the poem.

Well I had to say something in my defense
As for the poem - Brilliant!

Vishal16 wrote:

Well I had to say something in my defense
As for the poem - Brilliant!

No one was accusing you of breaking up(though you did cheat on him)


Can you elaborate on the brilliant bit? Lines you liked? Lines that were flawed? How it could have been better? Suggestions for future poems?

Cheat Smeat

The Ronaldo saga ruined the gang, it was drowned
I laughed hysterically, while the others frowned
Friendships were broken, people were removed from the list
All I thought at that time was "There must be a twist!"

There wasn't a twist sadly
We needed a change badly
So we decided to move the gang to a forum gladly
But it all went tits up I yelled out madly

^Best IMO
No flaws as such but avoid writing long versus,just 4-5 is good enough

Vishal16 wrote:

Cheat Smeat

The Ronaldo saga ruined the gang, it was drowned
I laughed hysterically, while the others frowned
Friendships were broken, people were removed from the list
All I thought at that time was "There must be a twist!"

There wasn't a twist sadly
We needed a change badly
So we decided to move the gang to a forum gladly
But it all went tits up I yelled out madly

^Best IMO
No flaws as such but avoid writing long versus,just 4-5 is good enough

Well didn't I tell you I was fucking bored while writing it. Didn't have net at that time plus couldn't study so the words flowed.

Its okay in this case I was telling you for next time

Vishal16 wrote:

Its okay in this case I was telling you for next time

Yeah I'll make sure I split it up into two poems

Yas make sure